November 16, 2006
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papercut
i, long ago, committed love to verse
etched it on a note placed on her desk
and
hoping to impress
i wound up dead instead
committing suicide.
"dear _what's-her-name?_,..." i poured my very soul
hoping that my lines were of gold.
but no, far south of bullseye built a house of foolish pride
now crashed, slow-motioned, in a sloppy heap.
she laughed, i cried/stayed quiet while she teased
"just what on earth!? i never had foreseen...!"
so lost, unbalanced, vomit on my knees,
i struggled to stay straight.
unfolding paper ends,
she quickly showed her friends
who snickered jealously.
i prayed for some release
( it never came for me.)
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yeah, so NONE of the guys i've been with have put anything to verse for me. i like it....and the music. i like it too.
that surely hurts a man's pride... papercut is painful!
haha! that sounds like my dad. yeah, well he said that he didn't care if i got the nosering (in fact he paid for it) but he said i absolutely CANNOT get a hoop in my nose...he says it reminds him of hookers and cattle.
unrequited love...might as well die!!!
how apt is the title "papercut"! i fkn hate those!
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